Tricky bits

[ksmith]

Injecting medical geek-speak into John Shroud's mouth. He lives and breathes the stuff, and is already giving me the fish-eye concerning some of my wording.

"Just go with it for now," I tell him. "I'll fix it later."

He appears skeptical.

Comments

[kateelliott.livejournal.com]

Oh, I hate that part when you need the character to speak but the words coming out don't sound like that person, and both of you know it.

[torrilin.livejournal.com]

Try bribing him with chocolate while you do the medical research. Works to make my rpg characters shut up...

[hoosier-red.livejournal.com]

Bitchslap that boy and remind him who the Author is here.

I mean, what's the point of being God if you can't act like it sometimes?

[kalligraphy.livejournal.com]

You know, for a moment there I thought John Shroud was a real person. I was thinking, where do I know that name from. He must be a famous doctor, what did he do again? Then I remembered :)