Tricky bits

[ksmith]

Injecting medical geek-speak into John Shroud's mouth. He lives and breathes the stuff, and is already giving me the fish-eye concerning some of my wording.

"Just go with it for now," I tell him. "I'll fix it later."

He appears skeptical.

Comments

[hoosier-red.livejournal.com]

Bitchslap that boy and remind him who the Author is here.

I mean, what's the point of being God if you can't act like it sometimes?

[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

You're the second person to suggest slapping John. Poor John.

[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

Make that the third.