I don't know if it will make the final edit

[ksmith]

"She looked up to find Feyó and Dathim standing before her, severe and silent and dressed formally in flowing trousers and overrobes, like the grimmest of angels come to claim the remains of her soul."

"She" being Jani...

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[hoosier-red.livejournal.com]

Okay, I must REALLY need sleep, because I saw something completely different when I initially read the title of this post. Somehow, the e and d of "edit" turned into a c and an l.

Which gave the post a completely different spin, of course.

[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

I have no words. Not even consonant blends.