a snippet

Mar. 13th, 2010 08:14 pm
ksmith: (teashop)
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From a short story I'm working on, title tbd:

I watched her walk away. Music poured out of doorways and passersby’s voices pressed from all sides and through it all the Stream continued to jabber and I told myself that I had misunderstood, that she couldn’t have said what I thought she said. She wore brown and black, slivers of dark consumed by the Friday night brightness, like bits of wood by a flame.

Date: 2010-03-14 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] e-moon60.livejournal.com
WOW! Yanks me right in...

Date: 2010-03-14 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristine-smith.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's several pages in, but I hope readers are pulled into the story by that point.

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