Things I hate about writing, #2385

[ksmith]

Prying apart sentences to add needed detail, sentences that already have the beat and the tone and will collapse in a pile of word-sticks if one more thing is added.

Comments

[kateelliott.livejournal.com]

On further reflection I really have no more comments to add beyond the ending being rushed. The ways in which it was rushed you will fix. It's just a great book. I was not thinking about anything but reading the story. The pacing is excellent, and I was able to keep the numerous secondary characters straight. However long it is, it seemed shorter.

[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time during your trip to read it.

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