wips and chains

[ksmith]

Almost 5000 words cut.

It hurts, but it doesn't. A week's labor lost, but what can I do?

There's the apocryphal story about the sculptor who is asked how he knows how to shape a figure. He replies, I just chip away everything that doesn't look like the figure. That's me now--I'm carving away everything in this first half of the book that isn't part of the story. Except I put it there to begin with, which is kinda like piecing together your own block of marble so you can go ahead and remove vast chunks of it instead of simply piecing together the right story bits to begin with.

My process is wasteful stinkage, filled with Fail at every turn.

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[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

You feel as though, OK, I've been doing this how long? And I still can't work out a plot in outline form?