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Aug. 17th, 2008 10:49 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ksmith1116 words today. This is still the new first chapter, which still needs wrapping up. I am not 100% sure that it's necessary, but I need to write it. The events happened, those events drive the story, and are important later. Folks talk about them. The place where they happen is important. So for now, the new first chapter stays.
I have of course stuck myself with the challenge of making the POV character think of less than he knows. I think I can justify it, but it will require more delicate word tweaking than I can do at this point. I am hoping that stuff occurs to me as the story proceeds, and I can keep going back and adding layers. It's one of those baklava chapters. Onion chapters. And it may not even make the final cut.
Tired now. Sleep. Monday. *blech*
I have of course stuck myself with the challenge of making the POV character think of less than he knows. I think I can justify it, but it will require more delicate word tweaking than I can do at this point. I am hoping that stuff occurs to me as the story proceeds, and I can keep going back and adding layers. It's one of those baklava chapters. Onion chapters. And it may not even make the final cut.
Tired now. Sleep. Monday. *blech*
