Sunday morning
Jan. 21st, 2007 08:01 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ksmithA) a pretty good song by The Velvet Underground
B) the day/time it happens to be
It is snowing, and has been for a little while. Fine, grainy stuff that I'm hoping doesn't amount to much. I don't think it will require much in the way of shoveling. I think "pushing with the shovel" and in some cases, "sweeping" will prove sufficient.
Revisions. Very happy with the word cuttage, which was necessary. It always bothered me that I hit the big moments so late in this book. Well, guess what--it bugged my editor too.
So, we're approaching the point where Jani starts to feel left out of the loop. In another chapter or two, that will switch over to really, really angry. Not pissed. Angry. There is a difference.
B) the day/time it happens to be
It is snowing, and has been for a little while. Fine, grainy stuff that I'm hoping doesn't amount to much. I don't think it will require much in the way of shoveling. I think "pushing with the shovel" and in some cases, "sweeping" will prove sufficient.
Revisions. Very happy with the word cuttage, which was necessary. It always bothered me that I hit the big moments so late in this book. Well, guess what--it bugged my editor too.
So, we're approaching the point where Jani starts to feel left out of the loop. In another chapter or two, that will switch over to really, really angry. Not pissed. Angry. There is a difference.
