ksmith | Lunchtime writing

Worked on J5. I'd been grappling with the same scene for over a week, and couldn't figure out where to take it--all the dialogue sounded flat and the overall action just didn't want to move forward. Decided to go with a fix I'd been pondering for a few days, even though it means some rewriting of a couple of scenes I thought I'd finished with. I'll take a chapter from the first draft and insert it before the problem scene. I think it will ratchet the conflict nicely, and allow the problem scene to shake out a little more naturally.

I would love to get 3-4 chapters reworked this weekend. We'll see how it goes.