*hrm*

[ksmith]

Amazon reviews. IknowIshouldn'treadthedamnedthings.

The last two for CoC have been interesting. A two-star who felt that "something exciting was just about to happen, but never quite did." The newest reviewer agrees, but liked CoC enough to give it four stars.

I don't write action adventure. The book is more about the characters. And I left out too much story.

Comments

[torrilin.livejournal.com]

...but you do do action adventure sometimes. And I'd think totally trashing a government building counts as action. But maybe that's just me.

And if you left out too much story, I wish I could see what you left out :o

[kristine-smith.livejournal.com]

Some readers have complained that I don't directly state what's going on. I have tried to be a little more direct in later books, though I don't know whether I managed it.