vacation's end

Had an email from Editor. She likes ENDGAME, but thinks some parts need work. I only hope that the parts she thinks need work and the parts I think need work are the same parts. It makes things...simpler.

*sigh* I wanted this one to be close to done. Guess I know what I'm doing for the month of November.

I could get the edit letter this week.

vacation's end

Had an email from Editor. She likes ENDGAME, but thinks some parts need work. I only hope that the parts she thinks need work and the parts I think need work are the same parts. It makes things...simpler.

*sigh* I wanted this one to be close to done. Guess I know what I'm doing for the month of November.

I could get the edit letter this week.

Error 404

So many years have passed since first you sought
the lands beyond the edges of the sky,
so many moons reflected in your eye,
(familiar newness, fear of leaving port),
since first you sought, and failed, and learned to fall,
(first hope, then cynicism, silent dread,
the countless stars, still counting overhead
the seconds to your final voyage of all...)
and last, in glory gold and red around
your greatest search, your final quest to know!
yet... ashes drift, the embers cease to glow,
and darkened life in frozen death is drowned;
and ashes on the swell are seen no more.
The silence surges. Error 404.

Error 404

So many years have passed since first you sought
the lands beyond the edges of the sky,
so many moons reflected in your eye,
(familiar newness, fear of leaving port),
since first you sought, and failed, and learned to fall,
(first hope, then cynicism, silent dread,
the countless stars, still counting overhead
the seconds to your final voyage of all...)
and last, in glory gold and red around
your greatest search, your final quest to know!
yet... ashes drift, the embers cease to glow,
and darkened life in frozen death is drowned;
and ashes on the swell are seen no more.
The silence surges. Error 404.