Mar. 30th, 2005
Finally, finally, *finally* finished a chapter that had just been dragging on and dragging on. It wasn't even a particularly long chapter--maybe 8 or 9 pages--but it flowed liked chopped rock. I think the problem is that I still don't quite have the handle on this POV, so actions are up in the air. Would she do this? Would she do that? At this point, almost everything rates at least a Maybe, and that makes it difficult to move forward in a definitive manner.
Of course, this is first draft. It's all supposed to suck anyway.
One thing is settled. POV is stubborn.
Of course, this is first draft. It's all supposed to suck anyway.
One thing is settled. POV is stubborn.
Finally, finally, *finally* finished a chapter that had just been dragging on and dragging on. It wasn't even a particularly long chapter--maybe 8 or 9 pages--but it flowed liked chopped rock. I think the problem is that I still don't quite have the handle on this POV, so actions are up in the air. Would she do this? Would she do that? At this point, almost everything rates at least a Maybe, and that makes it difficult to move forward in a definitive manner.
Of course, this is first draft. It's all supposed to suck anyway.
One thing is settled. POV is stubborn.
Of course, this is first draft. It's all supposed to suck anyway.
One thing is settled. POV is stubborn.