Incident review

sartorias reviews "Incident on a Small Colony" for Tangent Online's current issue, and liked it:

The tech stuff is neat, the atmosphere tense, with vivid description and convincing detail, the action pretty much non-stop, and the emotional tension builds inexorably. Three whammies before the end, all different: the thing that makes memorable stories is not just nifty skiffy, great pacing, but the electricity between human beings. One of my favorites.

Incident was my first short work to see print, virtual or otherwise. I'm very pleased with how it's been received so far.

::happy::

Incident review

sartorias reviews "Incident on a Small Colony" for Tangent Online's current issue, and liked it:

The tech stuff is neat, the atmosphere tense, with vivid description and convincing detail, the action pretty much non-stop, and the emotional tension builds inexorably. Three whammies before the end, all different: the thing that makes memorable stories is not just nifty skiffy, great pacing, but the electricity between human beings. One of my favorites.

Incident was my first short work to see print, virtual or otherwise. I'm very pleased with how it's been received so far.

::happy::